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Psychic Connection of Retardation
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Psychic Connection of Retardation |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
If you give me orders I obey If you tell me sweet things I'm weak Put on a pretty show Scrape clean solid thoughts Into a distant stare I see I want I yearn I get confused I'm stuck I get mad Different and numb Keep on believeing Through a mental expansion And curses from mom and dad Bless'em both Slow isn't no Don't bother with a name It won't be long Quick and dead Fought harder than before And picked up a profit I'm just a little waxy Melted and molded to your liking Soft and warm Easily squeezed The brightness to trickle to the floor He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
I especially loved the last four lines! Great wording in this one, Green! And this... "And curses from mom and dad Bless'em both Slow isn't no" Oh, how I've been there! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Craig, sounds to me as if you are shedding your skin . . . and ahh you described ME perfectly here: I see I want I yearn I get confused I'm stuck I get mad Different and numb |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Maybe I am shedding skin. A different kind of skin. Thats a poem. My skin isn't changing but my enviroment is about to change so my skin will also be different only because it will be seen by different surroundings. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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