Dark Poetry #4 |
Retro Sugar Pills |
symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
Razor blades for the babies Hidden vitamin tablets Give them what you think They need They absolutely want Chew chew chew It's nice and sweet Until the aftertaste When the righteous cuts Turn to desperate wounds And all the most needed advice Turns to pathological lies Novacaine the upper descent No matter how late How deep Echoes collide |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I didn't quite get it. But it sounded, wow......nice last line though. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Awesome~!~ LOVED IT... The best I could use to respond would be your name... symphony_of_thoughts ! Mind opening great write! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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