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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-10-05 11:50 PM

Save me, Save me,
I want you to crave me.
Nay, don't touch me.
The thought of you repulses me.
I hate you more than I hate myself,
But my heart misses a beat
When I see you,
And all the hateful feelings dissapear,
As my knees go weak
And my love for you
Consumes me.

Nonchalantly leaning against a wall,
A pillar of strength and concrete,
Indifferent to the world you gaze,
You gaze
And acknowledge my existence,
But your stare
Passes right through
Me.

Take another look
Please
See my heart
Breaking.

"Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

1 posted 2004-10-06 12:23 PM

yet another poem thats left that feeling in my stomach.

for soe reason the first paragraph of this song, really reminded me of jewel. u write like her in that paragraph, and i envy you.
my how i envy you.

great, aboslutely amazing piece of work.

beautifully dark

LOR

put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2004-10-06 09:40 AM

awww Kirsty, God can I relate to this so very much.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2004-10-06 11:46 PM

Yeah thats pretty cool. It kinda happens like that some time.

-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2004-10-07 01:52 AM

Wow, that was great. So much power in your poems. You inspire me alot.

Hollow.
Courtney.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

5 posted 2004-10-07 07:43 AM

i love your writing... you write with so much emotion and feeling. im envious of how well you write...
keep them coming
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

6 posted 2004-10-07 09:57 AM

I definitely agree with the others, and I also loved this one. Been in this situation so many times, I fool myself into thinking I have become numb to the feeling. We deserve to be better to ourselves... stewardship is not one of my better character traits unto me. Excellent write, with bad memories.

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2004-10-07 11:42 PM

"Take another look
Please
See my heart
Breaking."

*sigh*...I can relate to this.

Great poem...even though it's about something not so great. :-\

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:*
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

8 posted 2004-10-08 10:02 PM

This was heart wrenching. I know exactly what you mean, and how you feel. I loved this.

I know how it is both ways. To love someone and hate them, and to hate them, but love them. If ya get waht i mean anyways.

If ya dont, well tell me and i will explain.

ANYWAYS! I loved it.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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