Dark Poetry #4 |
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Mementos |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA ![]() |
Okay, I lied Don't look so bruised as if you didn't know the rules as if betrayal and deceit were something terrible and new It took too much to be your bitch and quiver, constantly at the end of your whip That leash you call your love (and made so much of) never fit And yeah, I know it's all my fault Since you would NEVER stoop so low And all these daggers in my back are not mementos of your brutal blows which fell so hard they broke my heart and all my bitter, brittle bones It's only a tragedy after we bleed. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I, too, have been the doormat (you used a much more poignant word [kudos for the candor]) for the aide in someone else's necessities at my expense, and then been labeled the bad guy. I applaud your expressionism in vivid, yet very poetic detail, and I'm not trying to make you feel good, I'm just telling you I liked it! (grin) Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
Momentos reminds me of how I used to pull the heads off of all of my sister's dolls and put them in our fish tank. We had more heads in there then fish. You just have to cherish those momentos! I take being called a bitch a compliment, as it means I've done something worth noting with explicatives. Good poem! "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Now that is dark news!?! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and this is to wish those daggers removed . . . ![]() |
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