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News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

0 posted 2004-09-30 02:25 AM

It scares me
How I scared you away
Not funny at all
How in finally letting loose
You cut me loose as well
I guess I thought the "yous"
Understood what I am
But now, understood by myself,
what I am
is alone.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

1 posted 2004-09-30 03:41 AM

Hi.

cool.

It scares me too.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-30 10:05 PM

Alot of things scare me. Mainly myself. And my thoughts. Nice work. Powerful.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

3 posted 2004-10-01 12:08 PM

wow..this was nice.

Everyone is scared...i am especially scared of relationships, which i didnt know, until recently, when i pushed away the most important person in my life...wich, i am still trying to get over, but yeah, anyways.

I love the poem. You did good.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-10-01 12:11 PM

nicely penned
the realization hits hard

Purity
Senior Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 526
Once Upon, USA

5 posted 2004-10-02 11:27 PM

When you said, "But now, understood by myself"... did you realize the dualism? This was awesome! SCARY, but awesome. But now it is understood by me...but now, I, in solitude, understand... wow.
You scare me. Great one!

Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

6 posted 2004-10-06 07:29 PM

Very nicely done with so few words so aptly put...wit and force tightly pacted, enters the narrowing door of my heart...

Thank you!!!!

Click

News_From_Nowhere
Member

since 2002-06-14

Posts 173
CU, NY

7 posted 2004-10-09 11:05 PM

I humbly bow with hesitation.
Thank you all for your kind words.

"So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm

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