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Crying the tears, that do not come.
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Crying the tears, that do not come. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Why do I sit here, Staring at my blank Computer screen. Reading your words, Of calming sanity, But I’m breaking inside, I can’t keep up This pathetic charade. Why do I site here, Letting the tears pour down my face. But as I wipe my cheeks, They are bone dry. For I am crying, Tears that do not come. I feel them stinging at my eyes, I feel them burning Begging to be released. But they do not come, I cry invisible tears, For I am slowly fading, Being taken by the pain, That eating away at me, Turning into an invisible pit Of self pity. Keep crying the tears, Keep crying the tears That do not come. Could end it all, But where is my will? I have not the will, So I am stuck here, Keep on smiling, They can't see your invisible tears, For they are the tears, That do not come. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
I cry invisible tears, For I am slowly fading, Being taken by the pain, That eating away at me, geuss wot girl. i am right there i'm in your situation. and i know how you feel. you have made me feel so much better, just to know that i am not completely isolated. this poem ached. i loved it your so talented. haha i know your not gunna believe me, but i think you need a reality check.... so believe me when i say it. love and empathy girl. stay strong darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is soooo beautiful... and liek darkness im am right there with you as well...... your writing gets better with every poem you post.... these are my fav lines..... Why do I site here, Letting the tears pour down my face. But as I wipe my cheeks, They are bone dry. For I am crying, Tears that do not come. I feel them stinging at my eyes, I feel them burning Begging to be released. But they do not come, this happens every nite... i love it... its going to the library.. keep writing Ruth |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Can't be helpful. Too early to be helpful. I am here too though. Loved the same bit as Ruth..... Hollow. Follow Sophs advice. Since its too early for me to give any. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
turning into an invisible pit of self pity. yep, that's me. i'm with you on this one. it always works for me to get real close to the mirror and just stare into my own eyes if i truly want the tears to be rivers of wetness. i feel ya, and nice expression here. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
What a psychological mind...(insert your own four letter word here, but I didn't choose "game")... Wiping those tears from your face that are bone dry... Whether insecurities are real for you, or you are real in your understanding of insecurities in general, stand proud. This was very well done. Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
thanks everyone for their replies. Ruth: thanks for saving my poem to your library. i feel honoured! Eve: thank you very much for the compliment. Purity: thanks for your reply too. i dunno, you mentioned my insecurity in one of my other poems too i think.. yeah, i think i am pretty insecure, i need to work on the whole "self praise/approval/everything!" Soph: I'm glad that you can relate, its nice to know that I'm not alone, and I have someone I know going through the same thing. Once again, thank you. Courts: Damn girl! How early are you waking up? come on...its holidays!! you shouldnt even be THINKING about being even close to conscious before at least 10.30am! thanks for your reply, thanks for all your replies! eek! my dad is yelling at me to go have dinner, so i must cut this reply short...i was becoming a tad long winded anyway.. darn, must go now... L&Darkness, KIRST |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Hahaha, I woke up at eleven, but even then, it's too early! Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
brilliant... Thats what you are, brilliant. I love this poem, i, like everyone els, am in the same sit. but i thinks it myght be getting better...hopefully. I really hate guys, or really just this guy, but yeah. he makes my stomache churn everytime i see him. Its some crazy **** ... ANYWAYs. Amazing poem! Im saving. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
true courts, eleven is too early lol. thanks karissa, damn guys eh. they just make everything even worse. thanks for saving my poem! *feels honoured and special* Kirst. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
oh! i just saw it..and now its too late to change so ill just write what its suposed to be in here. the line that says "that eating away at me" its supposed to be "thats eating away at me" darn, i forgot the 's'... Kirst "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wow you are so amazing please never ever ever never stop being urself or stop writing please LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord Kirsty, how I have been there many times myself, beautifully penned. |
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