One Opening from the Solid Jar

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Dark Poetry #4

One Opening from the Solid Jar

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-09-26 02:09 AM

The heathen night
Buried my skill
To comprehend
Lost ideologies
So deeply they stood
Masked under
Masked importance
Neglectable fantasy
Sparked against
The daily flints
But somehow
Managing
To access the lost potential
Fusing from likewise connectors
And focusing the head

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2004-09-27 01:12 AM

cant believe this hasn't had any replies.

I really liked it. It ached.

keep posting, thanks for sharing.

love and empathy
darkness

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

2 posted 2004-09-27 02:04 AM

I liked this poem, and didn't reply before, because too be honest, I found it a little confusing. However nice work.

Hollow.

I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World.

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