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Made the mistake, again
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Made the mistake, again |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Look at me go, watch me dance Watch me spill the words inside. Once again I mumble Once again I stumble Letting it all out Telling someone what goes on inside Just freaking them out Making them wish they’d never known. Do I think they can help? Do I think they can wave A magic wand, Make all my pain Disappear? Always and forever a resounding NO Screaming it into the depths of the world. What did I hope to achieve? They cannot help. No one can help. No one needs to know. But yet I still mumble Rambling on about everything Breaking down and crying Its too overwhelming How could you think they could help? Such a stupid fool, Why do you make the mistake so often? Why do you make the mistake so often? Close yourself up, Don’t let anyone in. Then maybe, You might not Be hurt once again. *this represents all the times, I let out my feelings to different people, at different times in my life, and how it was always, and forever will be a mistake* "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
God how we wish after we opened our mouths and hearts that we hadn't... This was a phenominal poem, vamp... and you continally amaze me with your style of writing. Thank you for sharing this with us, and continue to build a storehouse of understanding things that twist our hearts! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
wow..thanks so much for your reply purity. but it is so true, and i had just made that mistake once again, and i had all this stressed out bottled up energy, so i released it in the best way possible. "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
"but it is so true... and i had all this stressed out, bottled up energy... so I released it in the best possible way" A poem within itself.... You're getting really good!  Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
why do you make this mistake so often why do you make this mistake so often can i ask that a thousand times and still not know the answer? i feel you with this one. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
It is hard. Some will turn away, but there are others who turn back. I know how you feel actually. I find though, that they always turn it into something about themselves, how they had something just like how you are feeling. In fact that is just what I have done. Arrrrgggggggghhhhh, now I'm just confusing myself. Nice write. Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
thanks everyone for the replies. i think everyone sometimes makes this mistake. and it does suck, especially when things become awkward :S "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow...i can definetley relate. but dont forget, its not always a mistake... To tell you the truth, i am battling inside right now, of wether or not to simply tell someone that i am sorry. Wether it would be a mistake or not, wether they will accept it, and to tell you the truth, it probably will be, but i need to do it. For myself. ANYWAYS...amazing write, and i just want you to remeber, that sometimes, though it may seem like a mistake, it isnt in the long run of things... Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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