Dark Poetry #4 |
Feared and Afraid |
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
your so cold these days never want to talk to me always turning away hesitant to make it look like you care and everytime i want to do something about it you turn away again please hold my hand reassure me make me feel wanted again cuz i cant take you pushing me away pushing me out needing you to grip me if things go wrong but you refuse to let me in refuse to catch my eye in fear fear of what? fear of my strength? fear of my commitment? but one look in your eyes when you let me in for that split second tells me your afraid only of yourself your afraid of holding my hand afraid of letting me be afraid of falling in love with me put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
i don't know why you didnt like it. i thought it was cool..but hey, thats just one persons opinion, wait for others. i have a feeling theirs are gonna be the same as mine though... "Why are you wearing that stupid man suit?"-Frank from Donnie Darko |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I thought it was cool. Hey, lucky you got me to welcome you with open arms!!! whoa, jinks just pounced at me, I was giving her the same tips Mufasa gave Simba...."stay low to the ground" Hahahaha. I'm really happy for you Hollow, CK. (thats courtney kim btw, not calvin klein.) I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow...hun, this was AMAZING!!!! I can relate, only i was the one who did the pushing. Whoever you wrote this about, is lucky they have someone who understands so well. The person i pushed away, sorta just gave up, and before i knew what i had lost, he was gone...i'm still trying to let go...to forget. I am always wishing i hadnt been so scared, hadnt been so horrible to him. I really love him, and i screwed up. anyways..like i said before, amazing write! I really love it. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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