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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Restart Summon the magic of my heart Brush away ashes of passionate fire Painful honest Who am I A spirit with no boundaries No sleep Push through what hurts A beautiful collaspe Result of the horns Death self machine Mechanical, greasy, dirty in my head Dimly lit rust of desire Melodic sound of music scream Hungry without my life of being Work from my hands Pagan idols; fools with demands Heartless bastard on top of commands A slip and fall shatters plans Breath of witch, ignore God of the lands Protection of fierce angellic fury My friend dies to a home of Hell Flames roast a stench from fantasy Ignorant fool for what he chose A man that had much and not enough He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
There are two parts that struck me here most: the who am I part (My God will any of us ever know? We will have an inkling . . .) and the part about the man who had it all but not enough . . . That struck me the most because you know? I should be grateful for all that I have and sometimes I am not, sometimes I get down on myself and life in general and I should be happy I am here . . . Thank you for this, you just made me appreciate life that much more, Craig. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Hey you arn't the first one littlewing  this guy is an answered prayer for me...litterally. anyways I won't get into the details, but um, anywho..Craig it's a Melodic sound of music scream...get it? you could make a song out of this that sounds like that, what do you think? (brilliant dude) weeeaaa...need I say more? anywho, laterrr. - Bon "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah I wrote this last night while I was at my friend's house and I let him read it and he asked, "Is this about me?" I answered, "I don't know is it?" -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
I have to confess that I didn't like it. It sounds more like you've targeted a group because you, yourself, had misgivings. But I could be reading this all wrong. It's not the letting go that hurts, it's the holding on. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Not necessarily. Life seems hard as crap at times so I wrote a poem about rest, but like most of my work it only ends in ironic misery that comes from resting from the garbage of this life in Hell, kinda like a suicide. As for my personal screw ups. They may have a little to do with it, but its mainly because I keep running into people that I share my story with and they pretend its all a joke or a lie. As for shame about writing this way,... none. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Well, gee. I didn't say it wasn't good. :-p |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. lol. I guess I just dig out of myself like a man hole full of junk to sort it out into something somewhat enjoyable. lol. -Craig He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Very good, don't know why I didn't reply. Hey that rhymed. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thats cute Hollow. Thanx. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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