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Uprising to a former master
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Uprising to a former master |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Stupidify your cold weary mind hard wicked chance moves behind your silver eyes now you have no where to hide funny how it seemed you where so clever once before just when pride took over and went under did you see the world for what it really is don't lie to me I know your eyes stop pretending live your life it makes me sick to think I once loved you makes me choke to think I once touched you now from this poison cup you drink a death fit for a "king" a king over my former obsession a demon of my souls possession twisted your heart became shattered to pieces all the same. Running out of pain |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
This is awesome... "don't lie to me I know your eyes stop pretending live your life it makes me sick to think I once loved you makes me choke to think I once touched you"...VERY cool...i likes! great job!  ~*brezee*~ |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
This is awesome... "don't lie to me I know your eyes stop pretending live your life it makes me sick to think I once loved you makes me choke to think I once touched you"...VERY cool...i likes! great job! ~*brezee*~ |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This is pretty sweet and I likes as well. And I really love your critiques message. Jesus is beyond explanation, comprehension, and understanding. Actually I believe he's overwhelming to even think about. I liked your piece. hehe. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
awww, thank u guys! weea!!! Running out of pain |
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