Dark Poetry #4 |
Phantom |
~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
In shades iridescent in nature I beg her to gather in my arms to focus her attention in my direction I usher in destruction just to loosen her chains |
||
© Copyright 2004 ~K~ - All Rights Reserved | |||
muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
theres that word again.."focus" focus beautiful destruction maybe, at times, like a phoenix |
||
Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
to focus her attention in my direction Interesting ~K~ The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
||
Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
"I usher in destruction just to loosen her chains" Awesome write. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
||
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Excellent choice of words on this one ~K~! Iridescent... to gather in my arms... LOVED IT! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
||
littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
bound and gagged she lie beneath my feet I stood above this mortal a portal to me you see she is my salvation . . . (heh - I love your writing, K I would love to write with you sometime) |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |