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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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its not my fault im just lost inside your eyes blind to your selfish taste and numb to your perfection and its not my choice to follow you so self-consciously letting you rule my mind and take over my body sending messages to my brain manipulating my innocence breaking all spirit i once had tearing away at my insides playing around with my organs loosing control of my limbs attatching yourself once again to another and while you ignore me my mind is blank and my body mine again messages are sent independently my innocence maintained slow spirit mending insides placing themselves back together organs healing as i waste away lose control of my own limbs and don't know what to do with myself when you attatch yourself to her say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
very good poem...loved it in fact. i love the way you write...i don't know how you say your writing isn't natural...it certainly seems to just flow...keep it up, look forward to whatever your next poem has to bring. "Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
nicely written.... love your work... i love how you can write poems with so much emotion.... im jealous Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
They certainly hit the nail on the dot about this one...hehehe I love saying that. It sounds so weird. Okay then, anyways. amazing write. You are a very amazing writer, and definelty natural... Kant wait to hear more. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
This is so cool, I love this! *sigh* it happens that way though, sometimes ya think ya love 'em but it's better without them...I think I learned that sometime this past summer haha...anywho, keep up the awesome work and as always, great write...  ~*brezee*~ |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
What a leech! Only in reality the leech left you and you bled this poem. I can't think of a great reply, but I did truly love it.....meow/miaow. Um Um...next weekend are you free? And send me the tape of that song. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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