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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Curled in a ball on the cold hard floor. Soft sobs echo through my wretched body Knife held limply, lines scattered across my arm Too weak, to even restrain, depising my own release Screaming for help, the sounds do not reach, their deaf ears. Giving up is much easier Dreams of weight being lifted from my shoulders Far fetched and so far away from any reality I live in these dreams, protected from people People, the girls with turned up noses And boys with transparent glances Girls consumed with disaproving sniffs, flowing blond hair, skinny wrists Unblemished skin, scarfree arms, wrapped around their most prized possession. Smirking at your loneliness, that theres no guy beside you Guys themselves, shrug their indifference Just a blurry, ugly girl is all they see. Too busy feeling up their tarty girlfriend Passing me by, ignored by all, affection from none Condemned to never be wanted, pushed aside for better horizons The bell rings And I'm left alone in the empty corridor Doors slaming shut in my face. "Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Oh wow....I love your work. I love this poem, it's just so true and real life, so real life, so so real life. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
wow ! oh my,,,, I live in these dreams, protected from people People, the girls with turned up noses And boys with transparent glances i loved that so much....... btw.... ur lines about the knife, cuz of that ur poem might get taken off the board so just beware... happened to us before! LOR say wat you will, say what you mean, but you could never offend cuz your dirty words come out clean |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Hmmm...wow. I really loved this one. I definetely know how you feel, when it comes to this aspect. I have gotten used to it though. After so many years..you start to get numb to it. It is sort of ironic though. I am freinds with a lot of people that sometimes feel the same way, and they are beautiful and popular, and have everything, yet they feel unwanted and alone too.... Of course, there are still a lot of those girls, and many of those guys...i definetley know how you feel. Amazing write. Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Thanks guys, i really value everything you have to say. Positive feedback gives you the best feeling!!! lol  "Cut myself on angel's hair and baby's breath"-Kurt Cobain |
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