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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
You stride like a Mayan prince, holding my hated tether. As unbending as iron, the length of supple leather. Jerk me down on bended knee, tell me to lick your boot. Not Me. My Will won't bend, my Body may break. I'll leave quiet destruction in my wake. And still you won't have won. I live with the tigers, the proud, haunted eyes. So this is why caged birds sing. Planning escape in the dark, tortured moments, endless spark. You won't have clipped my wings. It's not the letting go that hurts, its the holding on [This message has been edited by PainBaneChaos (09-03-2004 11:17 AM).] |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
oohh niice! the last line made me smile! BIG CHEESYS once again dnt have much to say... so good... LOR "When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..." |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
VERY NICE!!! i love your writing... this one is beautiful and the way you have written this is amazing... a few typos but sometimes they cant be helped.... any waybeautiful... just beautiful. Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I absolutely love your look on life . . . |
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