Dark Poetry #4 |
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Meat |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110![]() |
Meat is all we’re meant to be Cursed for all our senselessness Rise ye drinkers of the night Free to see yet not dawn’s light Dread come on mortals who In error dared gaze upon you Free souls we who cannot see Dream again the sun with glee All the more bitter still Hands we clench in eternal chill That wanting, a vast emptiness Meat is all we’re meant to be We walk a path, to seldom tread Laced with tears and paved with dead Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kuru: I have always believed we are nothing more than cattle . . . *smile* well done |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
...very amazing... I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
"hands we clench in eternal chill" looooove it. Sensual write in a way...I enjoyed it. |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Vampyric or am I hallucinating? Because I do that from time to time. Immortal, eternal chill, dreaming of the sun. *ponders any and all metaphorical meanings for vampires...* |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
I was getting a vampirey vibe too. I really like that vibe. I was really blown away by your signiture line though! What's all this about deadly bob? |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110 |
yeah the vampire undertones are implanted on purpose ![]() ty for the replys PS(DeadlyBob is my gameing alias, the quote was origionaly written under the name DeadlyBob thus i don't want people thinking i stole it.) PPS (the sig refers to sufferings i had when i was younger and that i will not be avenged till the apocalypse/armageddon, its actualy part of a longer poem that i may post on the site at a later date.) Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. KuruShio (DeadlyBob) |
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~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
Gaming alias ~ I am intrigued. Are these games on-line? Or role playing? Please tell me! Oh, and I really think you should post the rest of that poem because that line is killer! |
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