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PainBaneChaos
Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

0 posted 2004-08-23 07:36 PM

Sometimes
you're begging for someone to know you're human.
The problem with strong people
is that we never sak for much.
But we're still human,
same as everyone else.
We need to be held,
like everyone else.
Cry,
like everyone else.
Scream,
like everyone else.
I can't be strong forever.
Not for you.
Not even for me.

brezee
Member

since 2003-06-02

Posts 140

1 posted 2004-08-23 11:21 PM

this it so true! I think I might possibly be one of those strong ppl..."The problem with strong people
is that we never ask for much.
But we're still human,"...yea, i like this, it's simple and well put...nice job, as always

~*brezee*~

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

2 posted 2004-08-24 07:55 AM

soo true... im like that and sometimes having to be strong all the time gets to me and i just burst inside....
you have captured these feelings perfectly.... nice write...
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

3 posted 2004-08-25 01:42 AM

AH!!! stop writing so well!
OMG STOP IT!

i looovvee every poem your post. i love them.

so true in so many ways.

LOR

"When i close my eyes, i remember how to smile, under my umbrella im an accomplished exile..."

Laney
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 85
Illinois

4 posted 2004-08-25 11:44 AM

Must agree...this poem rings true for many. Fustration. Good write!

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

5 posted 2004-08-25 06:30 PM

Please don't bite me, you sound like another guy. and I'm a guy. and I'm not gay, so no really.
Being strong is kinda hard because sometimes you do want to pop, like a zit and let all the gooy stuff out. And sometimes that isn't quite so cool.
-GIS

No turning back, this time, no walking away -Kutless

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

6 posted 2004-08-27 11:33 AM

this is so true. so true. keep up the writing. I love your stuff. Ice

lost and afraid i am calling out to you light angel.

PainBaneChaos
Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 150
The point of no return

7 posted 2004-08-28 11:11 AM

Thanks for your replies. I'm glad so many liked this. But Green... I'm a girl. Very muchly so, in fact. Lovely zit phrase, by the way.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

8 posted 2004-09-03 11:53 PM

wow...i really loved this one.
I could really relate.
I have always been the "strong" one
with my freinds, and family, and sometimes, i wish people would jsut realize,
that i cry too, and i get hurt, and i get so frusterated, and annoyed
that i want to scream,
and sometimes i just want to give up. Sometimes, i want to just forget everything, and do wahtever the hell i want!!!!

...Sorry, i think i may have gotten a lil carried away....lol

Okay, anyways, i loved the poem. It was amazin'!

Karissa

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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