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That's all there is to it...
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
I love you That's all there is to it No matter what it is I will help you through it But there are little things They probably shouldn't matter but sometimes they hurt I'm the ball, you're the batter I don't want it to be this way I'm sick of being let down It happened again today I should expect it by now. I ask is it worth it And tell myself no But for some unknown reason I STILL can't let you go. But I'm going to now No matter how it hurts I'll do you like you did me I'll leave you at your worst This time I'm ok I don't need help through it It's simple,I hate you That's all there is to it... |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Loved the change from the first stanza to the last. Great quality. Hollow. "Why are my visions so unliving with dreams? And why do I no longer care?" - Stygian |
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Manth88 Junior Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 45IL, USA |
Hey Hey, Good Write, Write until you can't write anymore!! Cuz Yur Awesome At It!! !^*Manth88*^! |
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aussie teen Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 396Australia |
this is seriously kool.... i love how you have written this.... changing how you love them at the start to hating them by the end... keep it up this is serioulsly mad writing. want to see more soon Ruth live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever...... |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and reply! I truly appreciate your thoughts and comments!, Thanx again  ~*brezee*~ |
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