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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
Do you follow do you follow well the lines which stray on their usual down. I found a spot, its empty, I found a place that is not for me. and the words come out choppy, as I speak, then gasp. and attempt to speak again. I'm trying to refamilarize myself into the monotony, and make myself be all the colors at once. To fall short in pale comparison. A raging beige, verging on yellow. Do you follow, do you follow how I sing my tune with the passion I used to feel for you But now I must disguise. This is the usual way down just follow my eyes along til you meet hard against compact soil. A grave were digging with the steady resistance of our hearts. |
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brezee Member
since 2003-06-02
Posts 140 |
I really like this, I like how you used the colors in it..."I'm trying to refamilarize myself into the monotony, and make myself be all the colors at once. To fall short in pale comparison. A raging beige, verging on yellow."...that's cool. Great job! btw, I like reading your poetry but, as with some others, a lot of times I like them but, I'm not sure what to say lol...I'm sure you may know the feeling...again, awesome write and keep up the great work!  ~*brezee*~ |
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