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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-12-11 10:04 PM

One more moon
full in face
another reminder
as time stacks
minutes into
moutains,

more tears join
puddles that swim
into rivers,

and i wish
i could pour
like a blizzard of snow
melting
as the sun returns,
without destination,

pour once and for all
floodfuls of your
everlasting hold
on my heart,

bleed skyfuls
to drown
the world in crimson

and eclipse
the one more moon
that brings me back
always,
to thoughts of you

****and i will always love you forever, r.******

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-11-2003 11:25 PM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-12-11 10:05 PM

This is beautiful.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2003-12-11 10:19 PM

Quite beautiful. Loved the last stanza.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-12-12 10:20 AM

and eclipse
the one more moon
that brings me back
always,
to thoughts of you

****and i will always love you forever, r.******

Michele, this is so sweet. You know that I
love these romantic poems. Thanks for
sharing yours with us.

Happy Holidays,

Ethel

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

4 posted 2003-12-12 10:52 AM

As always I'm drawn to poems about the moon. You write very well.

Deb

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2003-12-12 10:54 AM

and i wish
i could pour
like a blizzard of snow
melting
as the sun returns,
without destination,

Tremendous write...

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2003-12-12 05:35 PM

Understood this from the bottom of my heart.
A graceful following from feeling to thought...well done.
Hugs,
TD

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

7 posted 2003-12-12 08:49 PM

This is the third time I've been back to read, without saying Boo.

So Boo! This is darn good!

~~J

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2003-12-12 09:37 PM

Michele - very warming to read. I'm actually hiding in my favorite spot, behind the moon, see you there...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2003-12-12 11:36 PM

thanks for reading and the comments of feedback

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2003-12-14 04:59 AM

sensually beautiful

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