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Of darkness |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Darkness There is darkness and Shadows in the hearts oppress Darkness is not a cad But the shadows do me bad. In the dark I rest my mind But also dwell shadows I find Fasting the phantoms of the past And the shadows that they cast It is the wrapping rouse and steer The tapping of the blind I fear The whispering of hollow point Attack my bones at every joint. Whispers me a tale of woe A whale of truth ago And vertigo tumbles me Upon a black and timeless sea A sea without the stars to guide Within this black I cannot hide. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You and I have discussed concept of vertigo - we both have wept 'tis not a fun thing this we know walking upright, then down we go... it makes for shadows lean and mean offering fantasy but shallow dream ~ for this I know, so be held in ease while I gently hug and squeeze...   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah dear Sy..a thought provoking post this ayem. I've been told on many an occasion that I am a bit dizzy. Perhaps a spot of tea would help?  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A somber write, Sy. I hope you see the sun today. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you my dear. Nancy, Be right there for tea,  scorpio Never fear the sun is here. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
All I want to do is wrap you in a warm embrace and say, "There, there, Dear Thigh Man, I mean "Sigh" Man, the sun is up and everything is going to be just fine."  Loveulotsuknow, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This hurts, dear Seymour. But it is only a temporary state of darkness, the light is right there to erase the shadows. Trust! Love, Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel I'd just love that. Margherita Thank you love. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sy, as always your work is brilliant! you touch upon this subject in a way that only you can...may you feel the sun upon your face and a smile inside your heart. take care sweet friend. amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dear Amy, You are a sweet friend and I wish you the happiest of holidays. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
another beautifully descriptive side of live....one that may touch us all, at times...in lack of awareness as well as a medical problem. Thanks Sy, wishing you a great day. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Thank you dear for the read and reply. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (11-25-2003 01:24 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sending hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweet. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I understand all too much of this, dear friend... No need to hide... you're not in there alone. *S* Excellent! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern Thank you love. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Darkest before the dawn, I hope. Do you really have vertigo or was this an analogy? In either case, best wishes. Really appreciated your writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just remember, there are good shadows too...like the ones that pass   |
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