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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia 
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If only I were Smarter clever as Oxford scholar Then what a life it be If only I were Wealthy flowing with money Then never a worry Would there be If only I were Righteous Overwhelming piety Then you would never be Quite as good as me If only I were Happy Contentment abound then never would I write abject insincerity If only I were You Sickeningly perfect Then I would always be Happy because I was you And not me. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
If only I were You Sickeningly perfect ouch.... a write with a bite...  i like it. snow "...why does my skeleton pursue me |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Brad, you are special in your own write! ~ I mean "right"! Actually in your write as well! The lives of those who may have more advantages, may not be as rosy as they appear! As Erma Bombeck wrote, "The grass is greener over the septic tank!" Loving hugs, EA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
I wrote this after hearing a bunch of people complaining the old "if only" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
If only …. yes we erroneously think so at times. But happiness lies within your heart, independently of these things. You know this. Love, Margherita |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Youd better be the one you had in mind ( yaself ) Than the one in your words. Enjoyed Smile Jes |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Sometimes I say to myself the exact same thing. If only... Great write.  ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you reading. |
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