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For Two Dear Lady Poets...Merry Christmas
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For Two Dear Lady Poets...Merry Christmas |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Dear Lady, there are no such limitations alive Nor such apparatus so vulgar that we can deem adequate For our needs are full of surprise, here, then, now and always We wrestle with forms of time, which will not distort Nor forcus on demise, yet being fully overviewed By strength, stamina and the wisdom of brilliant possiblity By some reenergized glove, adopting our blindnesses By a magical anthology, descriptive & invaluable Such forms are like an endless soft quiet falling snow Each taking shapes of their own, streaching the limits of mind Discovering the warmth of earth for the first time An unobtrusive and scholoarly silken tent, spewing prolific Poetic structures, manipulating like metal echos in our world What greater effect leaps example through our souls? A collection merely mentioning points of view, yearning for the ultimate The many sides of love, wearing privileged immortality Vistas crowned with a womb of themes, ebbing and flowing Through our veins, birthing ability…astounding! Deliberately blended with spiritual visions coupleting balance Innovations expressing sentiments, changing the face of life Keeping an element of good speech, comforting frivolous charms Into something aware of it’s own poetential, above and beyond Humor takes a significant circle showering us through the earthiness Of daily life….virtually expanding definition…what folly! What notice decides? What quickness of insight…simple poverty filled extravagance We are indifferent to the marriage of what is seen, yet we care Oh so richly In thoughts so deeply rooted to the precious stones of task Redeeming faith, painting smiles in our beliefs within earshot Abandoning all manners of modern times…with easy grace We will mold growing concerns in the essense of moments each played Like children striving with ambition…for guidence Combining fruitation’s ascent towards the embodiment of beauty A divine capture of chivalric immensity translating skillful arms Resolute and industrious…invincible profound charms Full of life shaping order, metaphoricially artistic endeavors Made conscious by the author leaning the seat of our hearts Endure…no mattter what wishes flee, for every endeavor weeps Trembles and hides…know, unafraid that good ends have loved well Without shame or disrespect or desire to please himself Let the heart come through the forehead, lusting within, enduring What bridles and attempts to improve the form, quite rare perspectives Giving distinctive cheeks courting eyes and lips with a tempest Steadfast, hold true… Yes, we will be a humble servants, tossed by the sea of despair Wounded by a glance, thus polishing our endeavors Follow sequence, until the final line is the corona of natural imagery Livelier and more clear, smooth to what is easy To the eye and heart, for our verse is an engagement never smashed! Where love shall never rein hopeless…but contemplates and encompasses To the true translation of expression, unbound…a free standing story In the act of writing itself as heroic themes in praise of famous Gods Essential inspirations, tended to like beloved life giving crops Forming long adorations living in thought Who is the most famous person to ever pass through our lives? |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! ~ and I too would like to say "Merry Christmas" to the "Two Dear Lady Poets" for having inspired such an incredibly fine write as this! ~ and might I also add, that what you have written of two other poetesses, applies to you as well! You have more than just the talent of a fine poet, you have the heart, soul, and creativity to go along with it! Merry Christmas, Lee!  Peace, Love & Poetry! Linda P.S. The photo warmed my heart. [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-10-2003 09:13 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ You have not only sent a bouquet but the whole flower shop. LOL  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Incredible write Lee, just lovely. Hugs. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my, Lee, this is beautiful....with such true feeling from your heart. I also wish a very Merry Christmas to this two ladies and also to you. Happy Holidays with Love, Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Merry Christmas Lee |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
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Estel Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 22 |
This is a poem you have to read all the way through to appreciate its richness and depth.  Merry Christmas to you! |
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