Open Poetry #30 |
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All is Changed |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania ![]() |
All is Changed You have changed the way my eyes have viewed the earth You have given thoughts new meaning, depth and worth All is different, every word has been immersed In you, before it spilled into this humble verse Every dream and venture that was long pursued Shines in rolling waters beauteously imbued Emerald, sapphire, azure, teal and cerulean By you, whose eyes have taught my eyes new ways to dream Every soul has been transformed into a child Every heart is viewed as tender, meek and mild Everyone is now endowed a second birth By you, whose gentle ways have changed perception’s worth Love has altered everything I do and say Love has changed the way I think, the way I pray Faltering wings were taught a different way to fly By you, who’ve giv’n this soul a better way to die Elizabeth Santos 11/24/03 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank that special person for me... it has brought you out to pen again... ![]() |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful dear lady.. and it is SO good to be reading you once again. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Only you could write this. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my! I got all emotional reading your loving poem of gratitude and inspiration. You have been missed Lady Liz! Happy hugs, Linda |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I too thank him every day for all the blessing he has given me too. Liz, this was incredibly beautiful, and very heartfelt. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is classic Elizabeth... which means incredibly beautiful. *S* |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
sooooooooo special a read this is... sooooooooo precious a write you've shared... Smiles2uPoetFriendElizabeth *~coco~* |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Liz - everything you write you write so well. This is another example of the wonderful poet you are. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Liz, a beautiful write as always M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Lia, it is a pleasure to read your words once again. This is beautiful, as always. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so lovely... especially the last verse! *S* |
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