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Mental Wings |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Mental wings I fly between the earth and sky A butterfly, illusions eye Above a scene of green on green With colors of bewitchment sheen My palettes source a rainbow flow Painted on with extra glow Sprinkled with a sky of gold Subtle strokes but not too bold Hover over morning’s dew The jewels of dawn waiting new Collecting nectar from the buds That shine like tungsten photofloods And in the misty mist of wile I mix a mix of magic guile And sprinkle it with ecstasy To effervesce the fantasy It stays with grace till early dawn And disappears into the morn |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
hiya Sy, well, good morning, happy to see you, but...your late!!! hehehehhee.... We're on the same sync again...on my way to work this morning I was thinking about the glorious radiance of life...and how very awesome it is...as is your poem...as is all the poets here and of the world...we are truly blessed in each other, are we not? Thank you kind sir, for writing and sharing...your voice is the voice of an emerald of morning! Smiles and hugs and happy happy day to you and yours. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I fly between the earth and sky A butterfly, illusions eye Above a scene of green on green With colors of bewitchment sheen My palettes source a rainbow flow Painted on with extra glow Sprinkled with a sky of gold Subtle strokes but not too bold Ya know, your way with words amazes me. I love this Sy.  Good Morning sweetie. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Sy, You sure know to paint one! Although this stood as a whole, I particularly liked these two images: "My palettes source a rainbow flow" and.... "That shine like tungsten photofloods" Happy holidays, Sy! Sadelite |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You paint images on these pages. A true word artist, Sy. believe in what your heart feels... [This message has been edited by scorpio (12-19-2003 08:39 AM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
More like enameled wings of excellent flight... Beautiful, Sy. Thank you for my morning-picker-upper! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful morning write dear Sy! Soar on! I have tea for us... Perhaps Randy could fly you on up here? ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Let peace begin with me... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Smiles and hugs are always nice in the morning. Gentle Spirit You are a sweet thing. Sadelite, And a happy holiday to you my dear. scorpio, You just gave me my morning sweet, thank you Sunshine, And thank you for being you. Hugs Nancy, Randy is at JM at the moment but I can make the tea.  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful morning write Seymour! It is cloudy here and going to snow. Hmmmm....perhaps hot biscuits and honey with tea on this gloomy day! hugs, Chris  "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, Good morning sweetie I hope it don't snow. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This flows so beautiful...great job! Eric |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hey Seymour I love to see you here With your smile so dear Your rhyme is so devine When read it sounds so fine It takes me many places And shows me many faces For of your loving heart You always share a part Thank you, my friend.  Hugs,  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "That shine like tungsten photofloods" only one of the amazing lines of this poem. Loved it! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Mental Wings?....In Balladeer's case that would mean...flying by the seat of your pants!!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Thank you so much. garysgirl Thank you for the beautiful poem. Martie, You are to me a floodlight. Toe, Perhaps, perhaps and then again perhaps not. LOL |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sey, "Hover over morning’s dew The jewels of dawn waiting new Collecting nectar from the buds That shine like tungsten photofloods" Most wonderful! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you iliana. |
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