»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #30
»
The ever last
| Open Poetry #30 |
|
The ever last |
|
|
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
I found you in the gossamer linings Of your lost remnants So often determined by the causes That we gathered beyond The outermost conditions Of our moments told You walked slowly Candidly into that blurry light Your longings encased You considered nothing else Always believing in the daylight Meeting me at the cross over summit In-between our own caressed tightness You seem to match With the tomorrows And the ever last. If nothing is something |
||
| © Copyright 2003 mysticpoe - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
'and the ever last' ---nice line. I like the poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
||
|
GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
You seem to match With the tomorrows And the ever last. this makes me think... which is a good thing. It is beautiful  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
||
|
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
- Pilgrimage, Thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. Glad you enjoyed the last line. It didn't even dawn on me until you mentioned it. Thanks for pointing this out. poe - Alyssa, good to hear from you again. Thanks for commenting. Really appreciate. poe If nothing is something |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
So often determined by the causes That we gathered beyond The outermost conditions Of our moments told You walked slowly Candidly into that blurry light Your longings encased Really nice poem, mysticpoe! |
||
|
mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Thanks BluesSerenade, thanks for stopping by and taking in a read. poe If nothing is something |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
