Open Poetry #30 |
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to write from the odd side of the half |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence ![]() |
visual. taste of words beyond the tongue deeper in the gray abyss of non-reason it is shape of lines the pieces of one to color the fade of hole into labyrinth. existing between conception and similarity to conclusion, the assemble of cry is art to elude resemblance. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have sat here and read over this for several minutes now...and I fell deeper inside each passing second |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
glad to help ![]() |
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Brad Majors![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nicely done |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Missed this one the first time. Love the stanza: "existing between conception and similarity to conclusion, the assemble of cry is art to elude resemblance." Nicely done. |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Whatever the half... just keep writing. *S* I like this very much! *S* |
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Ratleader![]()
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You balance shape and form, form and substance, words and that which is beyond them. And you do it well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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