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Waiting....
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
Waiting. My eyes, scaled over from the tears ponder how your body sounds. These fingers, burnt by words, long to taste you tainted lips. Does your voice still swirl, envoloped by my clogged breath? I have eloped with your burdened soul.. just waiting, till we meet again. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I have eloped with your burdened soul" What a cool line... |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Beautiful............. Terri~  Well I will go down with this ship |
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Daniel van Vliet Member
since 2001-08-31
Posts 80 |
tk.. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Very stark for a poem of love -- but it works well in the setting you create. Nice work. |
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