Open Poetry #30 |
The Journey of the Ring |
Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
a shadow falls across the land the time of action is close at hand the fate of all has come to rest on little hearts put to the test they must venture far from home trusting another on where to roam a strange creature shall lead the way while they fight to keep evil at bay they must travel to the bowels of hell in order to break a terrible spell one forged thousands of years ago born in the fire's sadistic glow others once joined in the fight but of their purpose they lost sight for the power of the one true ring overshadowed even the purest thing turning good instantly bad making even the most sane go mad only one can resist it's awful curse so the others willingly disperse he carries on with his friend together until the bitter end they roam across the barren land hoping to change the fates at hand "When your life is tossed and turning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . . Tolkein's story still speaks today as it has always. . . well done. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- I am tired . . . |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very well written poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I love that book. Hugs Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love the Trilogy, and so does my daughter. We are awaiting the next movie... along with millions of others, LOL, who love those Hobbits. thanks for sharing this write! And of course, it is so wonderful to see you name in here, as yours was the very first post I tried to reply to when I joined Pips |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent! |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
enjoyed! Larry |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A very good poem of the tolkien trilogy...i love the LOTR....and cannot wait to see the final film....but then i have read the book and know the ending....i wont say...but the film is brilliant..and this just whets my appetite..thank you... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write...very muich enjoyed! Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Jennifer this was a great piece of writing great to see you back here~ ~ARH |
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