Open Poetry #30 |
Tryst and Turn |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Seascapes and sunsets paper the walls where pretty landscapes live only on canvas, candlelight beomes moonlight and she wishes for more, but knows why, on each breath both secrecy and fear of exposure live, as she goes home and washes him off again, saved and damned on the same afternoon in a 3 star hotel, trying to remind herself that there is no judgment in the Tao [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-05-2003 07:36 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess A bubble in the effervescence of your life. Enjoyed. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is so fine, and all too real. You know that I know, doncha? candlelight beomes moonlight and she wishes for more Really nice writing girlie~ |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
very well done..i should say.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
HMMMMM.......lot said in a small space. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this happens more than people realize...... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele? there isnt . . . God this writing is just . . . beautiful |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading, sue.....sure hope so, thanks |
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