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Peccadillo
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Peccadillo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Peccadillo A peccadillo has its spine Similar to a porcupine Within the private of its court All is hidden in the thought. A judgment error that we make In the moonlight mirrors wake Told that I was born for love I covert me a velvet glove But she was not prepared pursuit My arrow was an overshoot And I was melted stripped of joy The words that I had gushed so coy I though she was a butterfly But all I net were wings of sigh And sorrow laid a wall of din That put my world into a spin But now the spine has worked its way And I can see the light of day. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning Sy! Wonderful wonderful words of rhyme awaiting us this frosty Sunday. How about a cup of chai tea with me? ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I am following my sister Enchantress, as I always have...wonderful write Seymour. A pleasure to read. Apple turnovers this morning? Okie Dokie! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy and Chris, Apple turnovers and tea, that's for me.   |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sy What great words you've put together in such superb rhyme.....You haven't lost your touch I see. Eric |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Thanks for the flower. Take care. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Lovely poem Sy. Since all are going to meet, I bring my fresh baked apple-crumb cake with a little warm cream on top. See Ya Bon-Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie j, Thank you love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - more well written verse from a master... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bill, Thank you my friend. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
yes words of a master indeed I see the end of the ride murder suicide is how I'm feeling lately -Disturbed- |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Snowflake You're covering the field today. LOL Thanks |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good afternoon, Mr. T.! We all make errors in judgment and some of them come back to haunt us! But never fear, there is a lesson hopefully to be learned from each and every one of our mistakes! ~ May all the porcupines in your life be spineless!  Afternooner hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Thank you sweet and may the same be for you. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I though she was a butterfly But all I net were wings of sigh And sorrow laid a wall of din That put my world into a spin No one could write this but you dear Sy. But all I net were wings of sigh...Oh to be able to pick lines such as this out of the air. You are a master, and turn a phrase like no other. That line will play in my head for the rest of the day now.  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Looks to me that you got your fair share of butterflies flutting around your net these days m'friend LOL. You remind me of the Pied Piper of Hamlin (well the guy who charmed the rats to the water with his flute or was it a picadillo  , anyway you got a flock here, and I am one of them!) This certainly did cause me to a sigh, Sye. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose You are the kindest of kind. Sharon, You are a love. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I'm late today, Seymour, but I'm here.... and sighing at your rhymes....again... I hope that you had a good day. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Had a good day, thank you dear. |
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