Short Moods 15 (delirious thinking)

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Short Moods 15 (delirious thinking)

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2003-12-07 05:27 AM

This is actually an excerpt from a poem I read of mine tonight while looking for some of my work to let someone read.

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I am beautiful
and the language my eyes speak
is rare.

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill

Rick
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

1 posted 2003-12-07 07:53 AM

Temptress, we are all beautiful, but often it is our eye which judges the most and that language is understood by self.

I enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing.

Sincerely
Rick

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2003-12-07 09:53 AM

Nice twist I like it!

Wish I could write those but I'm no good at it.

Eric

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-12-07 10:58 AM

Temptress,
Just a simple lovely.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2003-12-07 10:35 PM

if you think that I don't know which poem of yours this is from. . . you're wrong. . .

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I am tired . . .

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