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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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sometimes the sand in water glass ceases spiral churning free certainty in gravity completing terra firm oh-don't-shake-me oh-don't-wake-me nerves my roots left unexposed pains are grains of sworl - remains a hypnotist of I suppose... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Delicately balanced brilliance! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen...I can see you flying, and you don't crash. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I suppose I would be amazed if I opened one of your posts and wasn't amazed. Did that make sense?   [This message has been edited by Edder (12-06-2003 11:28 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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eringobraugh Junior Member
since 2003-12-06
Posts 16Michigan |
Excellent flow and a beautiful read. I felt as part of the work, and moved where it took me. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yes. It is the wonderful balancing act you perform with your words that makes each write uniquely you. No one does it like you. It's nice to read your work again. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
And I wish I could just rid you of that pain period! C'mere you and get a big ole Canadian hug k?  (take that G!) LOL! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I never understand what you're talking about but I always love it the way you write anyway. Love this line. "a hypnotist of I suppose..." Duh, I'm just a big ol dummy. Love ya though Celeste. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Serenity, You are, "a hypnotist of I suppose..." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhhh K this seems like an epidemic as of late nerves my roots left unexposed Good Lord yes  thats for you and here thats for me beautiful as always Lady |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Still catching up. I missed you! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
good mix of words and thoughts.. |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Always unnerving when the hourglass grains flow up with a snickering sizzle, especially when one is caught in the gritty maelstrom. |
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