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A Song of Love
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A Song of Love |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A song of Love Love is tender love is sweet Love has swept me off my feet Has placed me in an Eden’s green With sky above a pure blue screen A place where I can walk on air An Ivy tower built with care A state of mind of pure surcease An open door a place of peace. Although it stays a teeterboard It has a lifetime of reward But you must learn to balance well Or else it wills a state of hell Of course the end depends on goal It can a snack or food for soul It is a sail around a bend But like all things it has an end. It is the game of human spore With children at the very core |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Although it stays a teeterboard It has a lifetime of reward But you must learn to balance well Or else it wills a state of hell" It's the balance, gets me everytime!! Morning Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Duncan LOL And there were times. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'Although it stays a teeterboard It has a lifetime of reward But you must learn to balance well Or else it wills a state of hell' This Libra plays the balancing act everyday~  Love you sweet poet~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good mornin', good mornin'! ~ I would like to be able to teeterboard as well as you do! --Do you give lessons? If so, count me in and I will pay you top dollar!  ~ May your board never teeter!  EA [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (12-01-2003 12:49 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I don't want it to end! That's such a lovely song, dear Seymour. Wishing you a beautiful week! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful words this frosty Monday morn Sy! Much enjoyed your words of love. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~  ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A gem this morning Sy..as usual!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Thank you, Seymour...you have such a wonderful way of pointing out basic truths. Always a pleasure to read. Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, what a beautiful song you have sung to us today. Thank you!! Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another classic Seymour to wake up to this late morning...goooood stuff |
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Jes Member
since 2003-10-21
Posts 422Denmark |
Hehehhehe im always trying to reach that balance with a smile but doesnt alway work. I enjoyed Smile Jes |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful lyrics, floating in the breeze of wisdom and experience Enjoyed reading, especially the ending - superb Liz |
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titch k Member
since 2003-11-25
Posts 123 |
hi seymour i am enjoying your verse, each one offering richly love Titch |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Enjoyed your reply,  Earth Angel, I think you're doing petty good. Margherita HUGS AND THANK YOU. Nancy, Be right over for hugs and tea. scorpio Thank you sweet. jc It's a pleasure to have you read me. Ethel, Thank you dear. passing, Thanks for the good stuff. Jes Never said it was easy. Elizabeth, It's always a pleasure to have you read me. Titch, Thank you so much. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (12-01-2003 05:16 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour You have painted such a wonderful picture with your words of wisdom and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I hope more people get to read your magical words. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Seymour, this is just beatiful. As always. |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Wow, you really have a telent for expressing the truth. It really is a teater bored. I never really thought about it that way before, and when i do, I find that your words are true. Good Job! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang You are very sweet and thank you for the read and reply. SmartChick Thank you my dear. Kristabell Thank you for the good job. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Love is tender love is sweet Love has swept me off my feet Has placed me in an Eden’s green With sky above a pure blue screen A place where I can walk on air An Ivy tower built with care A state of mind of pure surcease An open door a place of peace. ~*~ Amen. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you for the amen, |
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