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A Whole (In My) Lush Heart
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A Whole (In My) Lush Heart |
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maximillian Junior Member
since 2003-09-13
Posts 23 |
A Whole (In My) Lush Heart I hang like a deteriorating painting from a wall that surrounds me with asymmetrical lines. I hang swinging, swaying, lost as a pendulum swinging, swaying, lost. I hang like a deteriorating painting from a wall that awaits humane warmth. I hang swinging, swaying, lost as a pendulum swinging, swaying, lost. I am a painting, but yet I remain unadviced, without critique. I am a painting, am I beautiful or am I a shade of yellow, which is better? I hang swinging, swaying, lost as a pendulum, swinging, swaying, lost. I am a painting and I hang, swinging, swaying, lost. Held up only by a pin, intwined in my wooden frame, a pin, a pin. I hang held by a pin, my pivotal point, my life summed up. I hang swinging, swaying, lost as a pendulum, swinging, swaying, lost. [This message has been edited by maximillian (12-06-2003 06:22 PM).] |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Interesting.....  ~skyDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good imagery...shouldn't unadviced be unnoticed or unaware?...my guess is that you're a native French, Spanish or Italian speaker, 'aviser' being the French for 'to be aware of'. Welcome to Passions! [This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-07-2003 05:33 PM).] |
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