Were You Worth it? - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-11-23 10:38 PM

Your rose never opened,
like an aborted flight
tainting great expectations
with disappointment,
staggering over in a
vase of murky water,
as i procratinate,
for days now, accessing
and obsessing over where
to place you in the
lineage of lovers, that
never delivered past the promise,
alternating between the kiss
of kindness in the tossing
of your tightclenched
but crimson red petals
to the wind's graceful flight,
or to the surge of the sea,
via the flush of toilet.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-23-2003 10:52 PM).]

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

1 posted 2003-11-23 10:53 PM

It's never an assembly line you know; each is different from any other, and some need special handling in order to bloom.

There may be some that are damaged, either before delivery or by mishandling afterward, but even those have some potential. I'd look for that if I were you, and not be too fast with that flush.

Oh, I have to come back for an edit because I almost forgot the corollary question:

Were you?

~~J

[This message has been edited by James_A_Fraser (11-23-2003 11:17 PM).]

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:53 PM

Hey Buddy,,,,,lighten up. I am not sure where you are going with your post but I think it was rude and insulting. If you want to be critical, do it in a nice way. You are gonna leave yourself wide open for negativity with what you post. And I can tell you Michele is worth it. Just read all she has posted and you will know. She has talent, wit and sense of humor others could emulate.

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-11-24 12:18 PM

We're friends, and I just wrote a poem in her honor.... I figure I can tease her a bit if I want to.

What you think, Ink? Was I too mean for you? If so, tell me and I'll scratch it out!

But I have a feeling you got the point, though this brooklin fellow seems to have missed it.

~~J

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-11-24 12:25 PM

Enjoyed...James

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

5 posted 2003-11-24 03:40 AM

bumping because I love this

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-11-24 03:56 AM

*standing by, backstage, with pepper spray if needed*

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-11-24 06:50 AM

oh stop..........

brooklyn u are my knight arent u?
whyd u ever leave me back at that flagpole anyhow?
thanks for reading guys,
dixie, pepper spray, thanks, keep it handy
glad u liked tempress
and as for james, he'll learn.........in time

the untamable ways of the inkedgirl.........

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-24-2003 06:51 AM).]

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

8 posted 2003-11-24 09:13 AM

Thanks, M -- I knew you wouldn't mind... now if I can just untangle your chihuahua's teeth from my sock....

~~J

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

9 posted 2003-11-24 09:32 AM

I been flushed so many times...must be me.

Jason

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-11-24 03:24 PM

of your tightclenched
but crimson red petals
to the wind's graceful flight,
or to the surge of the sea,
via the flush of toilet.

Michele, I love reading you, though I don't know what to reply sometimes. You are just as cute as a button, you know. Your personality shines through in your posts, and I think you are a good friend to know.

Hugs to you, sweet lady

(psssstttt!!Hey, that's a really good picture up there!)

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2003-11-24 07:15 PM

thanks again, james, dont sweat it.
jason...yes the royal flush, ive been dumped there too on occasion, cant figure out why tho

ethel, thanks dear, you quite a charmer yourself, you know

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.