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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
vermilion dreams hibernate the sun evening shades pale, then ruminate convoluting the intricacies of my mind excepting the harbingers of thought. night’s augury of stifled silence bleeds a basin of broken memories listless, lost, lacking life blocking inspiration, suffering creativity leaving me in reverie alone in pensive thought desperately seeking expressions for my dreams ineffable, unutterable, inexpressible dawn o’erflows its banks and I can scribe again. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I've been out of college too long...had to run to the dictionary... exquisite writing! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
passing shadows, too funny.  Big words are to eloquence what gilding is to a lily. Unnecessary and unappreciated.Thanks for taking time to read and comment. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
It is the content of the words and how they act in the play of the poem that is important...some fine theatre here, Stevenr I know the feeling expressed in the poem.. _______ice ><> |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Yes, I must agree with Ice's reply on this poem. And I have known this feeling as well. Yet, lately I have been so overwhelmed with the day that the night produces no thoughts...except the thought of sleep. With a kiddo who has been ill and another who has been having nightmares, sleep escapes me as well. That's my story and I am sticking to it! LOL I enjoyed the read this morning. Patricia |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
steavenr, Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"dawn o’erflows its banks and I can scribe again." ~ and as Martha Stewart says, "...and that's a good thing!"   EA |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
To all, thank you for the kind comments. I love words. I love those who sculpt them well. That is why I love this forum. It is like gestalt therapy for the mind. |
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