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Her Priority, plz respond
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Her Priority, plz respond |
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adbdesperado18 Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 33 |
Priority, Excessive, Consuming all of you, Forcing you, Enticing you, To neglect me, Dissmiss me, Then, Discarded you, You mourned, Mourning Bridged the rigt, A rift left To widen, All respect gone, No longer can I glance Without cringing, Now, A relationship You strive to form, Sorry, Attempt arrived Years too late, Our bond, Harshly torn. You believed, The priority Awarded more time, Though your daughter Cried out In pain. I disregard you Now, Just like you Disregarded me, My trust, Betrayed, No longer Remains for you, Still, Hear crumbles, Face trembles, Sobs release, As silent tears Stread down At the mere thought Of you, But as I react, Everything sincere spoken, Those three words, Filled with emptiness, Mean nothing, Those words, I feel programmed to utter. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have read all of your poetry tonight. There is such emotion, expressed in strong clear lines...and much pain. I am glad you wrote here tonight. Your style is unique, and the content a bit strong for the open forum perhaps... There is much here to be appreciated. Also, it takes some time for other poets to get to know you...usually several posts in a row don't get the read that they deserve, because so many good posts need to be read. I care. ThisDiamond |
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