Open Poetry #30 |
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The Room, plz respond |
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adbdesperado18 Junior Member
since 2003-11-30
Posts 33 |
Shaky, battered door, Shutting once again, This time, Forced by cruel hands, Darkness encases the room, The dark remains not uncommon here, In this place, Blackness reigns, Among endless abyss of obscurity, Exists a lone picture That barely survives Each push the door Receives, When the lumber closes, The picture evolves To more of a memento, A mere trace Of its old self, As black chasm becomes unbearable, Light creeps through Slight cracks, Rapidly suffocates, Almost, Thinks the picture, Life cheated once again, Shadows prevail once more. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
I appreciated the thoughts in this one, and can only add one thing...that each of us have rooms like that, which can only be lit by the light of our souls....good work, my friend!! ~S~ Life is what you make it |
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