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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2003-11-23 10:21 PM

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-11-23 10:59 PM

sigh...this really says so much of your heart....

Lauren~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:50 PM

Lauren,
thank you so much
reading and commenting.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-11-25 01:35 AM

Greeneyes has it right, there's spirit in this. I like what I see here, and not just the picture.

~~J

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2003-11-25 01:57 AM

beautiful words...beautiful picture...

is the picture one you took yourself? It looks like that...Its breathtaking.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-25 02:22 AM

oh...this is captivating...just beautiful!

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

6 posted 2003-11-25 03:14 AM

thank you all so much for the comments... not all of my work comes straight from my own feelings... but this one did. and i appreciate the feedback on it.

thank you!!

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2003-11-25 09:14 AM

wow...

this was so beautiful! this really
is a powerful write, full of so much
emotion in very little words--that is
something i truly respect and admire!
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2003-11-25 05:13 PM

Nice...James

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

9 posted 2003-11-26 01:03 AM

amy, that's my usual goal, to get my point across with as few words as possible. thank you so much for your great comment.

james, thank you for reading
and commenting.

snow

"...why does my skeleton pursue me
if my soul has fallen away?"
~p.neruda

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2003-12-14 02:18 AM

Whooh....soooo sad, so powerful!

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