Open Poetry #30 |
How dare you!! |
Ada'doLisdo'ti Member
since 2002-12-10
Posts 123California |
Trusted you, Loved you, my innocence you stole made me powerless put me under your control Made me feel like a helpless kid again Made me believe it was my sin How dare you, What right did you have to take my innocence away How dare you, blame me for this When I was the one who you did betray The anger building up slowly till finally I come to see your the one that was wrong you've done this to me for so long How dare you, what right did you have To kill my childhood How dare you blame me for this when I never understood Its hard to wake up and face another day When this memory never goes away I wake in the night in a cold sweat What you did to me I'll never forget How dare you keep invading my life When I keep trying to move on How dare you haunt my dreams Why does this keep going on How....dare...you.... How....dare...you.... Cry long enough and no one cares..... The sweetest rose is one you'll die for... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is a poignant poem - so sad, the loss of innocence, especially when taken advantage of by an older person. Corinne |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Cry long enough and no one cares....." for God's sake i hope this statement isn't true |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This poem really touched my heart. I hope that things are getting better for you, if this is from personal experience. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you tell 'em |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sometimes it's good to get angry, and stick up for your feelings, especially when they are abused by the ones that you counted on not to abuse you! Let out the anger, as it will only hold you back, and what I feel from this poem tells me that you have great passion.......glad you chose to share it with us!! ~S~ Life is what you make it |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
It seems like the ones that are supposed to love you are the ones that are the most hurtful. Sending a hug. I know how much this hurts especially when you would never have thought they would have treated you that way. and more Love, Terri~ Well I will go down with this ship |
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