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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-12-05 06:24 PM

Rejection

I am softspoken in thought
feeling like I'm a hand-me-down,
knowing that "first cut was the deepest"
but not knowing if I can ever
get over the fear and sorrow
to ever find another
who knows how to share love.

I am mending, but there are side effects
to my thoughts and feelings.
The separation and solitude
often speaking louder than words,
my eyes see clearly what isn't there.
And my heart has shut itself down,
becoming emotionless, leaving the tears now,
for others who have something to cry about.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (12-05-2003 07:22 PM).]

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-12-05 07:12 PM

Here's hoping you can hold on to that softspoken you...sometimes ill meaning ones steal that from you, and rip it apart for sport. Guard your heart there are cruel ones out there.
Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-05-2003 07:13 PM).]

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-12-05 07:54 PM

Ah, Maureen. Your brave heart has not "shut itself down." It is just resting up for another whirlawind escapade with that rascal called love. Love the way you write. But...I think you already know that. hugs, Chris

"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-12-05 08:00 PM

the yin and yang of detachment, very well done

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-12-05 08:30 PM

I am mending, but there are side effects
to my thoughts and feelings.
The separation and solitude
often speaking louder than words,

I hear you honey!
Hugs, Maureen~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-12-05 08:39 PM

I am softspoken in thought
feeling like I'm a hand-me-down,
knowing that "first cut was the deepest"
but not knowing if I can ever
get over the fear and sorrow
to ever find another
who knows how to share love.

Maureen, just when the time is right, you will.

Ethel

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-12-06 03:26 AM

sometimes the tears run dry and people run out of love

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