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Day Dream |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Day Dream Standing on a rusty knoll Looking o’er a dusty hole I saw a glimmer down below A curl of smoke in wends of go. And there on left a downward slope Pebbles spread of gray brown taupe Leading to a shadows fall A pueblo built against the wall. And there a donkey stood a rail Head held low and swishing tail Pawing at the rusty dust Waiting for his masters must When out the door this manors lord Brought a shovel and working horde Strapped them on the donkey’s back Grabbed the rope and gave a clack And softly sang a song in swear “There is a rainbows end out there.” |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no, no, don't let the rainbow end......keep painting good morning, nice to see you, can it be a pips friday morning without your sweet words? |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very descriptive write, Sy. Golden to the end. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning write Sy! You posts cause one to stop and ponder...a good thing.  ~Morning hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
...a nice dream of hope... ~K~ |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been saving so many of your sonnets, that I must have enough to make a book out of them! Which brings to mind the suggestion that I have made to you on several occasions regarding you approaching a publisher! ~ Perhaps you could get an agent to handle everything for you! I do know that you have a marketable poetic product! I'd buy a book ~ even though I probably have every poem already filed away! lol I absolutely adore this particular poem! It is so descriptive, imaginative, appealing, dreamy, creative, fascinating, inspirational...  Have a glorious day, Dear Sonneteer! You and your muse deserve it! Loveyalotsuknow! EA P.S. And yes!!! “There is a rainbows end out there.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so embarassed! I went on and on and forgot to save it!......Oh, well! I have a good excuse this time! ~ I'm still all drugged up bec. of that poisonous bite!   EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess, The rainbow never ends.  Brad, Thanks for the nice. scorpio, You are a sweetheart. Nancy, What no tea, LOL  Kahlil, There is always hope. Earth Angel You are the sweetest Angel I know and of the first hundred poems I wrote, I picked out fifty designed one of my pen and inks for the cover and am trying to find someone reasonable to print up about 25 books, to give to my friends. And you are on the top of my list. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (12-05-2003 11:20 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That was thrilling news! I mean REALLY THRILLING news! ~ and I am also very honoured, my friend! You certainly added to my morning's smile! In fact, it is so big that it doesn't fit on my face!  EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Seymour  I think I could read your wonderful rhymes all day long!!  Have a good day, my friend. Hugs Ethel |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are a joy, vandana, Thank you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gosh darnit! how do you always do this to me? incredible! just a kickbutt poem and an awesome last line! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hey Seymour..I'll give you all the tea in China for one of your books!  Yer so sweet...thanks for reminding me..LOL. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I must say this had an interesting end. Deb |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, You are the sweetest of the sweet. Nancy, Don't worry dear you are on my list. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose, Thank you my dear. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Sy, You bring such joy and delight to these blue pages each and every day and it is an honor to read your poems and know your thoughts. You are quite a guy! Hugs for peace, Marti 'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.' |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - Day Dream's, lovely they are, you write about this one well... BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marti, You are a doll. Bill, Thank you my friend. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Good afternoon, Sy, Just had to drop by! I am so delighted that you, again, transported me to a different place with your wonderful detail, perspective, imagery, rhythm and all that jazz! I think it's great to publish those 25 copies, but that seems like such a small number for the quality of your work! Have a good one. Sadelite [This message has been edited by Sadelite (12-06-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour Thank you for sharing your wonderful words with us...they are truly a delight. Take care......Sue I am in motion |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sadelite. A little bit of economics involved. LOL Thank you for the read. Suetang, It is my joy that you stop to read me. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gold fever....eh SY? excellent write, loved the rhyme of it... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry, Don't we all have it in one form or another. LOL |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh no you don't! This is only the beginning of a story in my books LOL, Sye. So ... I am sitting here until I see part two of this and actually challenge you now, to write a story in poetry how about that? You can do it! I have the rest of my life here so I will just sit around and wait for it okay Hi Isabel! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, I wouldn't make you wait that long. LOL Look for Laissez-faire tomorrow, it's a look inside his pueblo. |
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