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Open Poetry #30

Melancholy Renaissance

mccrackus
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since 2003-12-04

Posts 6

0 posted 2003-12-04 10:58 PM

She whispers a tune in his ear, and they’re off on their merry way.
Fast as sound and just as fair, the wind wants him to stay.
With hustle and haste, it tries to pull him back. But he can’t be stopped.
Not by the forces of Nature or acts of God. And the skies mourn the loss.
Tears hit his head and stream down his neck, but he is too busy to notice.
Passing pastels of lily and lotus. Dream worlds with valleys covered in moss.
His is a sweet but somber tune, Hers a vivace in full bloom. So delicate
Is this parallel hymn, they struggle to avoid a
Requiem.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-12-04 11:01 PM

Hello and welcome to PIP!

enjoyed your first post and your style...I just had to post to a poem titled Renaissance...that is where I am from LOL!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (12-04-2003 11:03 PM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2003-12-05 04:15 AM

nice

mccrackus
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since 2003-12-04

Posts 6

3 posted 2003-12-05 02:10 PM

thanks, all.

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