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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2003-12-04 09:50 PM

Comeâ€¦
lie upon this wintered chest
dream with me as snow
covers a wandered path
do not worry over scars I carry
they were not meant to heal
but have served well
in tether of battered flesh
protecting a heart
that beats only for you

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2003-12-04 09:56 PM

WOW! what maiden could not hear this calling from depths of thy heart and what maiden could not resist loves calling...

Beautiful~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-12-05 04:11 AM

well done...touches my heart...but you knew that

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-12-05 10:03 AM

I'm proud of you, Ed.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

4 posted 2003-12-05 10:07 AM

Wow..lucky is the one that has your affections. So full of heart. I hope you won't mind I save this one.

Love,
Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-05-2003 10:07 AM).]

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2003-12-05 10:45 AM

your wife is so lucky to have such a romantic heart...i admire you more and more every time i read you...h

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

6 posted 2003-12-05 01:12 PM

ARH- Thank you for the wonderful compliment. I'm so glad you enjoyed this.

Dixie- Thank you so much. It's always a pleasure to have you here.

Lauren- And I of you. Luv ya!

Terri- Of course not, I would be honored.

Helen- No, I'm the lucky one and thanks for reminding me, as I fear I take her for granted all too often.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2004-01-20 03:56 PM

Scars are the sign of a warrior, Ed...
one who is protective

very nice writig

(I like that you can write in short, what would take me many verses)
*s
M

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-01-20 04:06 PM

i agree with maureen,
its amazing what poets such as yourself can say with so few words! fantastic!

Someday I'll fly, Someday I'll soar,
Someday I'll be So damn much more
Cause I'm bigger than my body
Gives me credit for.
~John Mayer

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2004-01-20 04:09 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, your poetry is a velvet blanket that warms the hearts of many, sweet friend, how can she not resist such a sensitive offering, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a ebautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2004-01-21 06:41 PM

With those last two lines, you give invitation no woman who loves you could resist. *S* Beautiful work! *S*

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-01-21 09:35 PM

Now that's romantic. Ed, what a picture of real love you paint!

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