Open Poetry #30 |
In Faith |
Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
My faith is weak The road is long But still I seek To sing your song I'm not complete When things go wrong When I am weak Then you are strong My tears will fall For life bears cost And to this squall I am storm tossed But through it all I'm never lost Though faith may stall It's yet God crossed Although I fear This life goes on And you draw near To lead beyond I hold you dear And faith I don I pray - you hear Then strength is born My faith is weak But present still And I will seek To do your will Each day we'll speak I'll pray until No longer bleak I pass this ill Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
i loved it. everyone feels a time in their life when they are scared and unsure. It's good that you have that special someone to hold on to. Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Darlin'Kethry~ Such a prayerful piece from your heart~ And a GOOD heart it is~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is lovely Kethry. hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful Keth, but then again your poems always are! such hope in this, makes the heart smile take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a perfect rhythm and flow with a beautiful message! Eric |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
I'm with you girl....I've been weak lately but am growing stronger....hang in there and God will provide. ~sky Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A beautiful write from a beautiful heart. *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A very touching heart song... Healing hugs, EA |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The metering seems near perfect... This was no doubt from your heart ~ enjoyed! |
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