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Iconoclast
New Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 2

0 posted 2003-12-03 12:48 PM

raging rivers of whispering whispers off set a lost nep-tune...earth shakes hands with her space and i'm left behind to suffocate in the gripless hands of time...

"man i'm fine. i just need to get on track."
get off that
sound that surrounds your wallowing
hollowing a heart never parted but you're still following
like you've been lost
for sometime
consumed by frost
and sunshine

in the air of selfish cares
I stare and daze a serenade into spaceless matter meaning nothing for now
so now what?
wow i'm stuck
in a pool of pitiful thoughts
luck hasn't ruled since the minute you caught
the sickness
to see the truth witness
and bear its fruits in forgiveness
shift this
fax it
matter fact i should tax it
for takin a toll on me
but i know better than to uphold the sea
that will forever be infinitely stronger than me
so I start to ponder breezing tired tongues to sleep
while tying my admiring hums I keep
my words
never swept clarity out from under my feet
so how can I expect to
see a sense more stubborn than me
and leave condensed views
of discoveries uncovering the unseen
hovering over the interwoven web holdin a golden ruler
measuring me too far and much too peculiar

everyday...
for the rest of my life
I can't close my blinds and pretend it's not there
the truth brutally beat me and permenantly pasted its bitter-sweet taste in my stare
sometimes fate isn't fair
it's got me wondering whether ignorance is bliss or oblivion
but i know that i love you...

[This message has been edited by Iconoclast (12-03-2003 02:40 PM).]

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2003-12-03 12:54 PM

Good Morning and Welcome to Passions....
this is a powerful first post....I hope you enjoy your time here among family and friends....

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly~

Greeneyes~

True poems rest between the words

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-12-03 12:57 PM

well done

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2003-12-03 12:58 PM

Iconoclast~

WELCOME to Passions~

And such a passionate rendering of your heart this is~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-12-03 02:44 PM

Welcome to Passions!
Very nicely penned.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~ Let peace begin with me...

Iconoclast
New Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 2

5 posted 2003-12-03 02:49 PM

thanks for taking the time to read it...i wrote this because my girlfriend posts on here and i just wanted to do something to try and make her smile...hope she reads this!! =) <3 ya babydoll...

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2003-12-03 04:30 PM

Hi Iconoclast,

this is well written. I think you'll enjoy this place.

Cor

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