Open Poetry #30 |
Poetry in Motion or Love is War |
Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
I had this dream and it was such strange thing.. I didn't know any other way to put it. So here it is. Bare with me.. (Guy sits in his favorite chair watching football as his girl walks over and turns down the sound) I love you More than you will ever know or ever imagine (He turns the sound back up) I love you The feeling is something that you can't explain (She turns it off) I know that you will never understand someone loving you more than they love themselves (He looks at her and scrowls a bit) I love you... Why do you look at me that way? (She starts to cry) Do my words hold no meaning to you? (He shrugs, stands and starts to walk to the kitchen) I love you Look in my eyes and look in my heart (She crawls behind him on hands and knees) I love you I love you I love you (Her words fade off as the door closes in her face) Too much... (She lays on the floor and curls in a ball by the door) Love, Ladycat Dancing is the loftiest, the most moving, the most |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonderful! |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
That's incredibly eerie. But, then, most of my dreams have been lately. Great write -*-*- |
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PsychoticBunni Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 162Mythical Atlantis |
oh the agony. so harsh and yet... most dreams are. lovely piece of work. Meg tragedy is cutting your finger. comedy is falling into an open sewer and dying. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Ladycat, I can imagine this one on stage--could be pretty real especially on Super Bowl Sunday! Effective layout. Smiles. Sadelite |
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