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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2003-12-03 05:22 AM



Master Minds

If you had one wish-
What would it be?
Let us think into the far distant future.
The master minds of this world,
have made a clock that will go back in time.
You would be able to go back one day, or a thousand
lifetimes.
What kind of wish would you make?
Would you go back in time to the period of Adam
and Eve?
When all was perfection and death had no meaning.
Would you go back to the time of the prophets, like
Moses, Isaiah, David or maybe Paul?
Is there a mark in history you would like to attend?
Would you want to give yourself more hours in a
day?
One, two, three hours or would there never be
enough time in your life.
Would you want a shorter day?
Your life is filled with pain and sorrow,and your
wishing the day will end.
Just a little relief from this world of grief and
madness.
Would you wish to go back one day?
To take back angry words, not realizing you will
never see this loved one again.
Wishing you had held that loved one or had held a
dear friend. Wishing you had said-
As they walked out the front door-
“Be safe I Love You.”
Oh! If only we had a master mind who could invent a
clock that would go back in time.

Love Bon-Bon

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1 posted 2003-12-03 07:55 AM


nicely written
LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-12-03 08:02 AM


Beautiful thoughts and ideas coming from the voice of love and reality.  You are a very special person, my dear...and this write of yours was awesome.  If I had one wish and could go back to one time in my life....hmmmmm...I know this sounds crazy, but I would want to once again experience the birth of my son...to me, that was the most awesome and miraculous experience in my entire life...me giving life...wow!  What an honor that was for me!

Anyway girlfriend, wishing you a wonderful day...and thank you always for your lovely poetry.  Luv ya bunches sis...Me

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