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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Shoulders slooped by way of life slow hands hurry up the deal a magnifying glass in hang between the aged breasts concealed by modesty of apron starch pigment simply can't be licked back upon the weary lips edges faded, ages spot. Thump the trump. She used to pound the colors of the cards revealed-- now she just sneaks fervantly trying not to drink too fast turning just the edge of deal-- the players say she marked the cards. "Dig your grave--it's just like spades!" She laughed until her teeth fell out. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karen...You captured much in this scene...including me.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Whoa lady!! Brilliant write! Love ya.. Hugs~ ~ Let peace begin with me... |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Sometimes I have to wonder where you found such a great muse. Another excellent write! -*-*- |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I met some of your "neighbors" in a geographic sense while on board the good ship Elation...I reveled in their sound, and smiles, and thought, of you. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiles at Kari--interesting that you should say "neighbors" as this was is a composite of that neighbor lady (the one who sent you the recipe) and my mother-in-law, who related a tale of having to pick up her teeth in a restaurant after blowing out the candles on her birthday cake. Both of them just priceless. Thanks for reading this one, folks. There wasn't a deep message hidden in this one (no matter what my shrink thinks) Just a little portrait of some coon ass ladies.  |
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